She asked her mommy to look the toy
Which the salesmen showed in coy
The toy was average not that great
He doesn't have flickering eye
He doesn't have mimicking effects
The body was unshaped
The cloths were old
But still the toy
Was waiting to be sold
He can't run, he can't fly
He looks ugly when he cry
Everything he tries to cover
But nothing about him impresses others
After looking for sometime
Her mom asked
Do you want that toy?
She rejected the offer and
Start her search for toys again
The toy was placed in box again
I felt pity for that talent-less toy
Until I find that I too was a talent-less toy
Meaning hidden in the last line...
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Truly said.. :)
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Deletesome where i related my emotions to this post
ReplyDeleteNice write up!!!
keep blogging :)
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DeleteGood Thought Process Behind :) Liked It.
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ReplyDeleteSo well penned... enjoyed the flow and liked the hint :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Anunoy ,, for reading it... :)
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